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“I had a really great time Gil,” She smiled at him as he walked her to the door. He blushed and shrugged as an attempt to hide his red face.

She pinched his cheeks and scrunched her nose, “Oh Gil, you’re seriously the cutest! You’re the best boyfriend ever!” She squealed and his face turned an even brighter red.

Her face grew calm as she searched her bag for her keys, her fingers brushed over them several times, but she was waiting for a goodnight kiss from her longtime boyfriend Gilbert Beilschmidt. His hand reached the back of his neck to scratch it, his way of showing he wanted to do something, yet he was too afraid to. She sighed as she pulled out her keys and opened the door.

She smiled lightly at him and said, “Night Gil,” Shutting the door quietly behind her. He sighed and drove home. After shutting the door behind him, he dropped the keys on the small table by the door and blew a few loose strands from out of his face.

“Bruder! You’re back from your date,” His younger brother Lutz called as he made his way down the stairs, “Why are you home so early? Did you get some?” He wagged his pale blond eyebrows suggestively.

Gilbert’s face burned in embarrassment and he shook his head quickly. Lutz facepalmed and sighed dramatically at his brother.

“Bruder! I told you, she’s going to get bored with you if you don’t do anything! Now if she were meine frau-”

“Nobody wants to hear about how you’d treat a girl idiota!” A voice hissed from the kitchen.

“Si, nobody wants to hear about how you nearly kill a woman in the bedroom,” A higher voice joined into the conversation.

Two men walked out of the kitchen, the first with muted colors on and deep violet eyes, the second walked out, running his fingers through his luxurious blond hair and was dressed like Barbie if she were a man (meaning in bright colors and just as fabulous). Lutz’s pale face held a scowl, causing his long scar to wrinkle and grumbling about how he could actually satisfy women. Gilbert began walking silently out from the room, when a hand pulled him back and towed him to the couch.

“So, bruder, how did it go?” His younger brother’s face held a crooked grin as he threw his large arm over his slender shoulders.

“Si! Si! Si! Tell us Gilly-bear!” The fabulous barbie man squealed nearly knocking over his younger brother.

“Louise! You F***ing idiota, you nearly knocked me down! Watch where you’re going” The younger tanned man growled at the fabulous Louise.

Gilbert shifted in his seat and pushed his brother’s arm off, “Fine.” He answered in a bored tone.

“Ugh! Just fine?! That’s all you’re going to say? No dirty details, like kissing?” Louise whined to Gilbert. Gilbert’s face turned red once more as he shook his head furiously.

“Ja, mein bruder hasn’t kissed his frau yet.” Lutz answered with a chuckle.

Louise gasped and his hand rose to hold his chest, “What? How long have you been dating this girl Gilbert Beilschmidt?”

He shrunk away, wishing the earth would just come up and swallow him in one bite. His eyes shut as he tried getting away from Louise.

“No, no, no, no. You’re not getting away that easily, il mio Gil-Gil.” His gloved hand reached over and took hold of his arm and pulled him to his feet, “Come come, I’m going to help you Gil.”

His crystal blue eyes widened, “W-with w-w-what?”

“Getting the girl silly!” He giggled, snapping his free wrist forward.

“How can you help him with a woman idiota? You’re gay, you don’t know anything about women!” His younger brother called from the other room.

Louise gasped and held his free hand to his chest, “You have injured my heart Adamo, but that won’t stop me. And for the record, il mio fratello, just because I like fashion, doesn’t make me gay.” Louise slammed the door behind him and dragged the frightened Gilbert away, showing him the secrets of winning the girl.

“Where are you taking me Gil?” Her voice held excitement as he parked near a park.
“You’ll see.” His face held the ghost of a smile.

Her face glowed with happiness as she thought of how far he had come since they had first met. He never showed any sort emotion when they first crossed paths, and now he was able to smile and speak a bit more. Really she was quite happy with where they were in their relationship, but she wished from the deepest part of her soul that he would kiss her. It didn’t have to be anything like in the movies, a simple peck on the lips would be enough, but she didn’t want to rush him into things.

The stars burned bright in the night as he held the door open for her. She took his hand and held his hand tightly as they walked through the dark park. Small bright green and golden dots floated and swirled in the air around the park.

She gasped and pointed at the dots, “Look Gil, fireflies!”

She pulled him and frantically throwing her hands in the air, attempting to catch the tiny lights around them. She giggled as she rolled down the small hill and came across a boardwalk. He ran down and caught up to her at the meeting ground between the earth and the wooden planks.

“Gil! Look! There’s more over there,” she pointed to the very edge that hung over the inky water. she pulled him once more towards the edge.

“Carefu-” He tried warning her about the edge, but his warning came too late and they went tumbling down into the lake. They swam up to the surface and began laughing in unison. He pushed his hair out of his face while she shook the hair out of her face. He became quiet and held her close, his cheeks becoming painted in a bright crimson. They began to look deeply into each other's eyes and leaned in closer. His lips pressed against hers softly and she wrapped her arms around his neck. They pulled away for a moment, and pressed their lips feverishly against each other’s lips once more before coming out of the water.

She cuddled close to him and hugged his warm jacket closer to her wet body, “I love you Gilbert.”
He smiled and pressed his lips into her hair, “Ich liebe dich auch meine frau.” They sat on the edge of the small pier that had caused their first kiss and basked in the moonlight and in each other’s company.
Hey look! A sequel for 'I'm With You'! Oh Mah Gerd! I was listening to Disney songs (don't judge me...:XD:) and 'Kiss the Girl' came on and BOOM! The sequel! :iconomgsocuteplz: 2p!Prussia is so Flipping cute and I love him so much! And looks like you gots a kiss out of it too~

2p!Prussia, 2p!Germany, the 2p!Italy's belongs to their respective owners
I only own the plot!

Part 1: [link]

:iconheplz:looks like I tricked you guys with mah mature content block huh? But Lutz will be...well Lutz...
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sis554 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Awwwwww
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stayonstraintrack Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww~ I knew prussia would be a sweety, even with a mature filter on
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morgann--steig Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
2p Prussia's name is Gilen  
and 2p Romano's is Flavio
   get it right lady
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LonelyReaper2012 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Actually, the names could vary. Thank you very much.
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Iwantcandy987 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well that was rude, Please be nice to people on the internet!
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Incedia8 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student
Excuse me...

Last time I checked, Himaruya only created one of the main group's designs, which are the 2p!Axis characters, 2p!Nyotalia (Axis, Allies, and Prussia), and possibly a sketch for 2p!Russia. The 2p!charaters don't even have an official name.
Once we get into the other characters in the '2p!/Other Player' Universe, the other ones are created BY THE FANS. All the designs and personalities of these 2p!'s are made by the fans. I cannot stress this enough. By. The. Fans. I have seen many names for the 2p!characters around while browsing different fan fictions. I have seen the name 'Louise' and 'Flavio' for 2p!South Italy (these two seem to be the most popular ones for him) and I've seen more names than I can remember for 2p!Prussia, including 'Gilbert' (which is the name I used).

Going by your logic, it would be like saying that Germany's human name is Ludwig Beilschmidt. Now, let me tell you something about how that is wrong.
Himaruya hasn't given us his human Last Name. His name is just Ludwig, but the fan base gives him the name 'Beilschmidt' because his brother Gilbert/Prussia's last name is 'Beilschmidt'.

You can find where I got all of this information on the Hetalia Archives pages online. Here are the links to the pages about the 2p!'s and Germany. 
Link #1: hetalia.kitawiki.net/index.php… ((2p! Information))
Link #2: hetalia.kitawiki.net/index.php… ((Germany Information))

I would like to know where you got your information on their names, because if I'm wrong, I want to fix the problem immediately.

You may also want to take a look at 'Netequitte' and double checking with your wording when speaking to people online. You may not mean to sound one way, but you may end up coming off as rude, mean, etc. Please be careful with word choice when writing to others. They can't hear your tone or see facial expressions like when speaking face to face. 
With the way you wrote your message, you came off as quite rude and honestly it upset me a bit. It would have been wise on your part to write something like, "Sorry if I sound rude, I don't mean to" or "I apologize if I come off as mean, it wasn't my intention" for example or just phrase it differently.

If I want you to at least take one thing from all of this, remember your word choice when writing to others. You don't know who is sitting behind the other side of the computer screen. I don't know you and you don't know me. You could be my age, older, or younger than me. Please! Be Careful! There is a person behind that computer screen.

Link: www.albion.com/netiquette/core… ((Nettiquette rules/tips))


I am extremely sorry if I came off as rude or mean in any way shape or form. It isn't my intention to come off in that manner. I am trying to show you my findings and give you the reasons behind why I have them named, portrayed, and their appearance. I am very sorry again for sounding a certain way and for the very large message.
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's probably one of the most respectful ways to deal with a person, good job. Kudos to you~:TipOfTheHat: 
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Incedia8 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student
Oh, thank you for the comment. I appreciate it very much. Thank you again! ^^
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome 
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italyisadolphin Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think you came off as rude at all, poppet. Here's some info on 2p!Romano:2phetalia.wikia.com/wiki/South…
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